Post by Kit on Sept 25, 2009 18:29:02 GMT -5
The Gunslinger, Chapter 21
The Original Version:
Ifrit appeared in the tomb entranceway with as worried a face a fiery demon can have. His sudden appearance startled Yuna and she jumped backwards into the rack of rusty gun-arms and close combat attachments.
“The temple guards are at the door,” Ifrit said. “You need to leave Vincent.”
Vincent nodded and walked out of Barret’s tomb, followed closely by Yuna. When Vincent tossed back his cloak to revel his holstered gun and headed for the tunnel, she ran ahead of him and blocked the tunnel entrance.
“You can’t fight your way out! I won’t let you kill anyone.”
“I wasn’t going to kill anybody and there is no other way out…unless,” Vincent smiled and looked upwards.
“If you’re thinking of putting another hole in my ceiling, I will broil you where you stand,” Ifrit snarled and the temperature jumped twenty degrees.
“It was just a thought,” Vincent said innocently. Ifrit crossed his thick arms over his chest and just glared.
“Um, I might have an idea,” Yuna said quietly.
MY VERSION!! :D
Vincent: I wasn’t going to kill anybody and there is no other way out…unless... *looks up at the ceiling and smiles*
Ifrit: Dont even think about it
Vincent: I wasn't thinking anything *walks off*
Ifrit: You were thinking of blowing a hole in my ceiling! Again!
Vincent: I honestly have no idea what you're talking about
Ifrit: For the love of god, stop playing with my mind and just get it over with! Blow the freaking hole in the goddamn ceiling!
Vincent: If you insist *blows ceiling apart*
The Original Version:
Ifrit appeared in the tomb entranceway with as worried a face a fiery demon can have. His sudden appearance startled Yuna and she jumped backwards into the rack of rusty gun-arms and close combat attachments.
“The temple guards are at the door,” Ifrit said. “You need to leave Vincent.”
Vincent nodded and walked out of Barret’s tomb, followed closely by Yuna. When Vincent tossed back his cloak to revel his holstered gun and headed for the tunnel, she ran ahead of him and blocked the tunnel entrance.
“You can’t fight your way out! I won’t let you kill anyone.”
“I wasn’t going to kill anybody and there is no other way out…unless,” Vincent smiled and looked upwards.
“If you’re thinking of putting another hole in my ceiling, I will broil you where you stand,” Ifrit snarled and the temperature jumped twenty degrees.
“It was just a thought,” Vincent said innocently. Ifrit crossed his thick arms over his chest and just glared.
“Um, I might have an idea,” Yuna said quietly.
MY VERSION!! :D
Vincent: I wasn’t going to kill anybody and there is no other way out…unless... *looks up at the ceiling and smiles*
Ifrit: Dont even think about it
Vincent: I wasn't thinking anything *walks off*
Ifrit: You were thinking of blowing a hole in my ceiling! Again!
Vincent: I honestly have no idea what you're talking about
Ifrit: For the love of god, stop playing with my mind and just get it over with! Blow the freaking hole in the goddamn ceiling!
Vincent: If you insist *blows ceiling apart*
